Subject: Gen-ART LC Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-pbb-vpls-interop-05

From: Ben Campbell <[email-masked]>
Date: Mon, 23 Sep 2013 15:29:16 -0500

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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document:  draft-ietf-l2vpn-pbb-vpls-interop-05
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2013-09-23
IETF LC End Date: 2013-09-24

Summary: Ready for publication as an informational RFC.

Major issues:

None

Minor issues:

None

Nits/editorial comments:

-- Abstract:

Please expand H-VPLS on first mention

-- section 1, 1st paragraph:

Please expand VPLS on first mention.

-- section 4, 3rd to last paragraph: "Different PBB access networks..."

The previous and subsequent paragraphs say "PBBN access networks". Should this instance also say PBBN?

-- section 4.3:

2nd paragraph says this scenario is applicable to "Loosely Coupled Service Domains" and "Different Service Domains". The 4th paragraph mentions "Tightly...". Does that mean the scenario also applies to "Tightly Coupled Service Domains"? (i.e. should it be added to the 2nd paragraph, or removed from the 4th?)