Subject: RE: Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07

From: Ravi Singh <[email-masked]>
Date: Sat, 20 Apr 2019 02:09:04 +0000

Thanks Jouni.
Taken care of this feedback in latest version.

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> From: Jouni Korhonen via Datatracker [mailto:[email-masked]]
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> Subject: Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-bess-bgp-vpls-control-flags-07
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> Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I read the document and think it is ready. IDNits warnings and comments are
> easily/automatically fixed when new version is submitted.
> 
> I only have few editorial nits/suggestions.
> * Section 5.1 says "Assuming the below specified network topology.." while it
> could also use an exact reference to Figure 1. * Section 5 is written so that it
> assumed the reader has already read Section 6. Maybe swapping Sections 5
> and
> 6 order would make sense?