I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive. For more information, please see the FAQ at . Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-unequal-lb Reviewer: Mallory Knodel Review Date: 16 Nov 2023 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. Major issues: Section 3 as the Solution Overview seems out of step with the remaining sections in that it properly describes the relationships between 4, 5 and 6, but it appears that 7-10 are additional over arching considerations that might benefit from being extracted from the discussion of direct solutions. Suggesting perhaps that 4, 5 and 6 be treated under the solution space, whereas the remaining substantive sections 7-10 be presented as additional considerations and tradeoffs but not direct descriptions of full solutions to the problems outlined in the introduction. Minor issues: Not all acronyms are properly expanded in order of their first-time use which hinders readability. Seems 12. Operational Considerations is superfluous and plenty of document dependencies also do not have this section. Nits/editorial comments: The focus of my review did not expose any nits/editorial comments though I believe there are some that have persisted across the various versions that I compared and I would encourage the authors to do a full copy edit ahead of IESG submission.