I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-general-constraint-encode-16.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20150107 IETF LC End Date: 20150117 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - you use a strange indentation for sub sections... Perhaps it is from the tempate?? Anyway it will be handled/fixed by the RFC Editor. - 2 page 6: 1 -- the device is switched(e.g., ROADM/OXC) ^ add a space here - 2.2 page 7: OxFF -> 0xff (letter O -> digit 0) - 2.2 page 8: RestrictType -> RestrictionType - 2.3 page 11: 0x01(Inclusive Range) ^ add a space here - 2.3 page 11: I can't understand the unnumbered in this statement: "... Note that the Action field can be set to 0x01 (Inclusive Range) only when unnumbered link identifier is used." - 2.6.1 page 16: I suggest: Num Labels -> Num Labels = N in the schema - 2.6.2 page 16: I suggest: Num Labels -> Num Labels = 2 in the schema - 2.6.3 page 17: missing parenthesis: "positions (Num Labels) and beyond SHOULD be set to zero" ^ add ) here? - 6 page 28: I don't fully understand why RFC 5307 is an informative reference and RFC 4203 (same with OSPF in place of IS-IS) is a normative one. - pages 31 and 32: perhaps another side-effect from the template: inusual (for a draft) IP statement & co... Thanks Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr