Thanks to authors for addressing the previous review comments. The updates look good. The followings are a few additional nits: 1) In the model, “container flow-spec” has been changed to “container traffic-spec”, but the description has not been updated, shown as below: container traffic-spec { description "Flow-specification specifies how the Source transmits packets for the flow. This is the promise/request of the Source to the network. The network uses this flow specification to allocate resources and adjust queue parameters in network nodes."; 2) Most names of list and leaf-list have been fixes. The following three were missed: “leaf-list member-apps” should be “leaf-list member-app” “leaf-list member-services” should be “leaf-list member-service” “leaf-list member-fwd-sublayers” should be “leaf-list member-fwd-sublayer” 3) Section 10. Security Considerations would need to include a list of “sensitive or vulnerable” nodes. RFC 8349 shows an example. Thanks, - Xufeng