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Document: draft-ietf-idr-long-lived-gr-05
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2023-07-12
IETF LC End Date: 2023-07-13
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:This is a well written document ready for publication.

Major issues:None

Minor issues:None

Nits/editorial comments:

   We update RFC 6368 by specifying that the LLGR_STALE community must
SB> Perhaps “this memo updates”
   be propagated into, or out of, the path attributes exchanged between
   PE and CE.

This would probably address the ID-Nits complaint.