I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Sorry I'm late with this review, given that the telechat was yesterday, but it is held up by discusses that are related to my comments, so maybe my comments will still be useful. Summary: Almost ready. I have a few concerns about controlling access to network management topology information. Abstract: This document defines a reference path for Large-scale Measurement of Broadband Access Performance (LMAP) and measurement points for commonly used performance metrics. Other similar measurement projects may also be able to use the extensions described here for measurement point location. This informational draft defines some terminology and methodology for describing the measurement points and paths exercised to gather metrics about broadband performance. This methodology is to enable the sharing of information in a way that can describe where in the network the metrics were generated. This draft does not define any messaging formats, and does not expose any information on the Internet. Since this does involve sharing of information between interested parties, there are potential privacy issues. Privacy is discussed in the security considerations section, and refers the reader to the LMAP Framework document that discusses privacy in more detail. The document doesn't discuss who the information is meant to be shared with - is this sharing within an administrative domain, or across (peering?) domains, or made public? This does involve exposing network management information, which might be sensitive because it exposes the network topology and might identify nodes in that topology. It might be good to at least point out that those who create the reference path descriptions be careful who they share the information with. If this were a MIB module, the reference path "management objects" would probably need to be included as read-sensitive in the MIB security boilerplate, and would recommend suitable confidentiality and access controls. I see that Benoit has suggested generalizing this information beyond LMAP. That might make this topology exposure issue more important. Which makes me, as an OPSDIR reviewer as well, wonder if there should be an associated MIB module to enable the sharing of this reference path information in a consistent manner - a manner that already has confidentiality and access controls, and for which operators/administrators are already careful about sharing network management information. Of course, having a MIB module for the reference path by itself would not be very important if the measurements themselves are not exposed via a MIB module. The quality of the text is good. I found the content understandable even though I have little background in LMAP (but I do have a background in network management so I understand the reference path issue). David Harrington dbharrington at comcast.net +1-603-828-1401