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Document: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5019bis-05
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2024-03-23
IETF LC End Date: 2024-03-29
IESG Telechat date: ?

Summary:

This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the 
review.

ISSUES:

MINOR: 4

1) MINOR: Abstract:

The abstract from RFC 5019 has not been carried over to this bis. It has 
been replaced by an explanation for why RFC 5019 is being updated.  Once 
this is published this explanation text will cease to be relevant to a 
new reader. I suggest bringing back the abstract from RFC 5019. 
(Possibly with updates.) The explanation for why the bis was made can be 
moved to an appendix.

That appendix should also include the list of substantive changes now at 
the end of section 1.

2) MINOR: Duplications from RFC 6960

Sections 3.1.1 and 3.2.1 now includes ASN.1 definitions copied from RFC 
6960. I suggest that you at least make clear that these are copies and 
are not changed from RFC 6960. Or reconsider whether including them 
substantially improves the document.

3) MINOR: Security considerations

You should consider adding security considerations discussing the 
implications of the backward compatibility with RFC 5019. (E.g., 
continuing to support SHA-1.)

4) MINOR: Examples

Is there a reason why Appendix A containing examples has been removed?