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Document: draft-ietf-netconf-over-tls13-03
Reviewer: Jiankang Yao
Review Date: 2023-10-28
IETF LC End Date: 2023-11-13
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC

This document is clear and in good shape.


BTW,
In section 1,
"
	      |  Implementations that support TLS 1.3 [I-D.ietf-tls-rfc8446bis]
	      |  should refer to TLS 1.3 [I-D.ietf-tls-rfc8446bis] in Sections 4
	      |  and 5 of [RFC7589].
"

The "|" looks to be odd to me.

remove "|"?