I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at . Document: draft-ietf-oauth-jwsreq-?? Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review Date: 2017-01-24 IETF LC End Date: None IESG Telechat date: 2017-02-02 Summary: This document is not ready for publication as a standards track RFC. [Reviewers note: It is quite possible that the problem listed below is my error. In that case, this should be considered as ready with minor issues.] Major issues: I can not find any record of an IETF last call for this document. I looked in the document history and the IETF discussion list. If I missed it, I apologize for being oblivious. Minor issues: Why is the example if section 4 (and others later on) described as "non-normative"? Is it incomplete? incorrect? An example is, by definition, not a full specification. The language seems designed to reduce the value of the example. I would recommend removing all the "non-normative" notes from the examples. They are clearly stated to be examples. Nits/editorial comments: