The draft addresses/fixes previous comments.

The draft, as well as the module, is well written and the only issue I've found is kind of unclear use for the /nw:networks/nw:network/nt:link/pm-attributes/vpn-pm-type choice. I don't understand the logic of having one case config true and the second one config false. Does it mean that the second one is the default? Then it should be stated in the choice. I'm not an expert in the area, but I understand the choice as a way for clients to select the type of performance monitoring. Then it is kind of confusing that I can actually select only one of the available types. What about having config true presence container in the second case and holding config false leaf(s) there, wouldn't it be more clear?