To: foo-wg-chairs@…; draft-foo-name.all@…; Cc: rtg-dir@…; foo-wg-mailing-list; Subject: RtgDir Early review: draft-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id-03.txt Hello I have been selected to do a routing directorate “early” review of this draft. https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id/ The routing directorate will, on request from the working group chair, perform an “early” review of a draft before it is submitted for publication to the IESG. The early review can be performed at any time during the draft’s lifetime as a working group document. The purpose of the early review depends on the stage that the document has reached. As this document is close to working group last call, my focus for the review was to determine whether the document is ready to be published. Please consider my comments along with the other working group last call comments. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see ​http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir Document: draft-ietf-ospf-lls-interface-id-03.txt Reviewer: Loa Andersson Review Date: 2018-06-29 Intended Status: Standards track Summary: No issues found. This document is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be considered prior to being submitted to the IESG. I have gathered the nits in a word file that has been sent to the authors and chairs. I also recommend that the authors take a look at my proposed change to the IANA section. Nits: The nits found is that the Abstract is too raw, but as sufficient info are available in the Introduction, this should be a simple editorial change. There is one sentence at the end of section that I think is ambigious. But I leave it to the authors to update if they think it is necessary. LSA is actually not a well-know abbreviation, and should be expanded. However, I think it should be well-know, since this is within the purview of the LSR chairs, I leave to them to take necessary actions if they see fit. I have suggested some editorial changes to the IANA considerations. /Loa -- Loa Andersson email: loa@pi.nu Senior MPLS Expert Bronze Dragon Consulting phone: +46 739 81 21 64