I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at . Document: draft-ietf-ospf-yang-?? Reviewer: Erik Kline Review Date: 2019-07-17 IETF LC End Date: 2019-07-17 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Major issues: Minor issues: I feel like the "version" text in 2.3 was confusing. The first thing I did was glance back up the overview where I (a) didn't see "version" mentioned and (b) initially thought that "af" was maybe a proxy for "version". But then later on it seems that "version" is only a mandatory property of the LSA. I'm not sure that I have concretely useful suggestions for improving this text, and in fact it might well be that for expected readers of the document this is in fact a non-issue. Just thought I'd relay my experience. Nits/editorial comments: Page 25: NMDA RFC is 8342, not 8242. Page 81: references draft-ietf-bdf-yang-xx.txt. This is referenced elsewhere in the doc (correctly), so I think just remove the -xx may be fine?