I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-trill-rbridge-channel-06.txt Reviewer: Miguel Garcia Review Date: 2012-06-19 IETF LC End Date: 2012-06-20 IESG Telechat date: 2012-06-21 Summary: This document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC Major issues: none Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: The document is well written and easy to read. Congratulations to the authors. I have some minor editorial comments. - All the figures that represent bits on the wire do not follow the convention of numbering the bits. I would suggest to add the bit number as per the RFC style guide. This means adding these two lines to most figures in the document: 0 1 2 3 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 - Also, related to figures. I would suggest to add a caption to each figure, for example, under the figure in Section 2.1: Figure 2: RBridge Channel Message inner frame This allows other documents to easily refer to the figure by number (e.g., "Figure 2 in RFC xxxx"). - Section 2.1.1: s/species/specifies - Section 4. There are 5 bullet points. Something is wrong with the indentation of the third bullet point. /Miguel -- Miguel A. Garcia +34-91-339-3608 Ericsson Spain