Hi, I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving security requirements and considerations in IETF drafts. Comments not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Summary: * Has Nits Details: * You have a typo at the bottom of Page 15: [RFC8701]). Implemenations SHOULD select reserved values at random I am guessing this should be "Implementations" :) * Quick question: Is there no MTI token type? I would have expected at least ONE, unless your expectation are the greased values are your MTIs? -derek -- Derek Atkins 617-623-3745 derek@ihtfp.com www.ihtfp.com Computer and Internet Security Consultant