Hi,   Thank you.   Best Regards, Meral   From: Bocci, Matthew (Matthew) [mailto:matthew.bocci at alcatel-lucent.com] Sent: Tuesday, August 26, 2014 3:04 AM To: Meral Shirazipour; draft-ietf-pwe3-mspw-er.all at tools.ietf.org; gen-art at ietf.org Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last review Call draft-ietf-pwe3-mspw-er-05   Meral,   Thank you for your review.   I agree with all your suggestions and will fix them in an updated version of the draft.   Bets regards   Matthew   On 22/08/2014 16:33, "Meral Shirazipour" < meral.shirazipour at ericsson.com > wrote:   I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq .   Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.   Document: draft-ietf-pwe3-mspw-er-05 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2014-08-22 IETF LC End Date:   2014-08-22 IESG Telechat date: NA     Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standard RFC but I have some comments.   Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 6], Section 4.1, typo: "A noted in Section 1"---->"As noted in Section 1" -[Page 6],"but each node MUST attempt to determine a loop-free path", if the only method to detect a loop is http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6073#section-7.6 , then perhaps a reference to this RFC would be useful. -[Page 8], Section 5, typo :"consesus"---->"consensus"     Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com