I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-simple-simple-08 Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: Feb-11-2013 IETF LC End Date: Feb-14-2013 IESG Telechat date: Not known This document is ready as an Informational. Some comments for changes follow. Major: 0 Minor: 2 Nits: 1 Minor: - S2.1, discussion of rfc3265: RFC3265 is now made obsolete by rfc6665, I believe an update is appropriate here as well as other places where a reference to rfc3265 is made. Additionally, a reference to rfc3856 will be appropriate when we first talk about presence as a SUBS/NOT event package i.e., s/Presence is defined as an event package/Presence is defined as an event package [RFC3865]/ - S3.2, discussion of rfc3862: Does CPIM stand for "Common Presence and Instant Messaging" or does it stand for "Common Profile for Instant Messaging", as expanded in rfc3862 itself? Nits: - Abstract, perhaps better for a standard document to use more formal language and: s/It breaks them up into categories/It categorizes the specifications/ Thanks, - vijay -- Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent 1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60563 (USA) Email: vkg at {bell-labs.com,acm.org} / vijay.gurbani at alcatel-lucent.com Web: http://ect.bell-labs.com/who/vkg/