Hello, I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see ​http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft. Document: draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-resource-sharing-proc-05 Reviewer: Christian Hopps Review Date: 2016-12-06 IETF LC End Date: Unknown Intended Status: Informational Summary: ======== This document is basically ready for publication. It has 1 minor issue and some nits that should be considered prior to publication. Comments: ========= I found the draft fairly well written, easy to understand with good references. I believe that after fixing the minor issue and nits, this informational draft will be ready for publication. This was the first TEAS draft I have reviewed, and as a result it may mean that my review is less in depth than others. Major Issues: ============= No major issues found. Minor Issues: ============= 1. 3rd paragraph: First sentence doesn't parse for me, i.e., I can't figure out what this means: "In GMPLS end-to-end recovery schemes generally considered, restoration..." Is it trying to say: "When considering GMPLS end-to-end recovery schemes, the restoration..."? or "Generally GMPLS end-to-end recovery schemes have the restoration..." or ...? Nits: ===== Most of these are due to missing articles (i.e., the/a/an). I may have missed some. 1. 2nd paragraph: Change: "ASSOCIATION object" to "an ASSOCIATION object" 1. 4th paragraph: Add a comma after "teardown" Change: "including following" to "including the following" 1. 6th paragraph: Change: "ASSOCIATION object with" to "an ASSOCIATION object with" Change: "Procedure" to "The procedure" Change: "ASSOCIATION object is" to "an ASSOCIATION object is" 2.1. 1st paragrah: Change: ", working LSP" to: ", a working LSP" Change: "Unlike protection LSP, restoration LSP is signaled per need basis." to: "Unlike a protection LSP, a restoration LSP is signaled on a per need basis." 2.1. 2nd paragraph: Change: "Typically when failure is recovered" to: "Typically when the failure has recovered" Change: "restoration LSP" to: "the restoration LSP" Change: "and torn down, while" to: "and is torn down while" 2.2. 2nd paragraph: Change ", working LSP on" to: ", a working LSP on" Change "and protecting LSP on" to: "and a protecting LSP on" Change: "Nonetheless, restoration LSP with working LSP it is restoring as well as restoration LSP with protecting LSP it is restoring can share network resources. to: "Nonetheless, a restoration LSP with the working LSP it is restoring as well as a restoration LSP with the protecting LSP it is restoring can share network resources. 2.2. 3nd paragraph: Change: "restoration LSP" to "a restoration LSP" 2.2. 4th paragraph: Change: "either working" to: "either a working" 2.2. 5th paragraph: Change: "either working" to: "either a working" 3.2. 4th paragraph: Change: ", node may" to: ", a node may" 3.2. 5th paragraph: Change: "reroute procedure" to: "the reroute procedure" Change: "rerouting process" to: "the rerouting process" 3.2. Table 1, Category C1, 2nd paragraph: 3.2. Table 1, Category C2, 2nd paragraph: 3.2. Table 1, Category C3, 2nd paragraph: In each change "This type of nodes needs" to: "This type of node needs". or "These types of nodes need". 3.3. 2nd paragraph: Change "with working" to "with a working" 3.3. 3rd paragraph: Change "with working" to "with a working" 3.3.1. 2nd paragraph: Change "has few" to "has a few". 3.3.1. 3rd from last paragraph: Change "in corner cases completion guarantee" to "in corner cases a completion guarantee" 3.3.2. 1st paragraph: Change "head-end chooses" to "the head-end chooses"