Reviewer: Tim Wicinski Review Result: Ready I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. I found the document readable. While this is a detailed document that updates an existing BCP, it adds only a few sentences of text. But I found the collected information very useful to read.