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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document: 

draft-ietf-vcarddav-kind-app-00

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date: 2011–10–29

IETF LC End Date: 2011–10–20

IESG Telechat date: 2011-11-3

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC.  

 

Major issues:

 

 

Minor issues:

 

 

Nits/editorial comments:  

 

I noticed that the example in section 3 is presented as XML but I did not see any text about 

adding the new kind to the relax NG schema. 

 

 “

property-kind = element kind { element text { "individual" | "group" | "org" | "location" }* }”