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Document: draft-mcgrew-tls-aes-ccm-ecc-07




Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour




Review Date: 2013-10-10




IETF LC End Date: 2013-10-10




IESG Telechat date: NA




 




 




Summary:




This draft is ready to be published as Informational RFC but I do have some editorial comments.




 




Nits/editorial comments:




-[Page 4], is there a reason to use both "seq_num field" and "sequence_number field" ?





-[Page 7], Section 7, Zigbee Smart Energy 2.0 working group, a reference would be useful since it is not an IETF WG.




 




 




Best Regards,




Meral




 




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