I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-weis-gdoi-iec62351-9-08 Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: Oct-27-2016 IETF LC End Date: Unknown IESG Telechat date: Oct-27-2016 This document is ready as an Proposed Standard. Major: 0 Minor: 0 Nits: 1 Nits: 1/ S1.2: Perhaps a ':' or a '-' to delimit the term being defined and the definition itself. Thanks, - vijay -- Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Nokia Networks 1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60563 (USA) Email: vkg at bell-labs.com / vijay.gurbani at nokia-bell-labs.com Web: http://ect.bell-labs.com/who/vkg/ | Calendar: http://goo.gl/x3Ogq